Friday, September 21, 2018
My 480 Word Narrative Pre Test
Today in Rimu, we had to write a Narrative for a Pre Test. First, we had to write a draft of our Narrative, Then we had to proofread and edit the draft. In my case, adding more writing. After that, we then had to publish it not once, but twice. 1 of which is a real publishing, and the second we had to add pictures to the writing. Here is my second publish.
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Hi Teegan,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your published work. I really think that you have made your writing even more engaging by choosing appropriate images and layout for your text. What audience did you have in mind when you wrote the story? What other formats could you have used to publish your work? Keep up the amazing writing, I'm really proud of how well you are doing. I look forward to reading your next piece of writing.
Mrs Taylor :)
Thanks Mrs Taylor for the comment!
ReplyDeleteThe audience I was looking for was a intermediate reader that enjoys these kind of storys. This has a total of 8 hundred and fourty words!
I am looking forward to seeing you next term with Blackie!
Kind Regards
Teegan Ducharme